There is a mystical place, a large opening behind a waterfall. I make my way behind the rushing water, to stand in the hollow indentation formed deep within the earth. I feel the misty spray of the water on my face, and see it trickling down the sides of the walls. I close my eyes and focus on the burbling of the water rushing down splashing off the surrounding rocks. Forming a pool of blue water. I then climb back down to go for a swim in the blue pool. Standing under the free flowing refreshing water. The sun is brightly shining reflecting on the surface of the water. Luscious green growth surrounds the waterfall making it a paradise.
– Jamie Whorton ©
Nature Poetry by Jamie Whorton 
So evocative…and free.
Love this!
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Thank you! I wish there was a place like this close by lol! 😊 !
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You painted a glorious portrait for your readers.
Well done!
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Thanks so much! When I write a piece like this sometimes I use pictures as a guide.. Other times its just pure imagination.. Or a mix of both lol! To get the scene just right..
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Well…you nailed it!!
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Thanks! But thats how I write about things I’ve never experienced.. I have too study it a little, and try to get a feel for how the experience would actually be.
Like I said in another post its weird how I came into writing by writing song poetry and it was sad teen stuff lol .. So its real weird I went from that to what I write about today..
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That, my friend, is the glory of this great journey. Our minds let our fingers (typing) to take us to other worlds.
We just need to be open.
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You have got that right!! Sometimes after I’m writing awhile and stop I have the same feeling that I get after reading a good book im sucked into.. And its quite addictive lol!
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It is…my drug of preference.
🙂
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Well.. Hopefully we can use our shared writing addiction to our advantage..
😊 !
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A co-addiction.
Love it!!
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Lol!! 😄
Yep! A co-addiction..
Living in worlds unseen!
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Ok…so that makes us addicts of the unseen.
I’m all in!
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Addicts of the unseen, fueled by dreams, lead by the heart..
Lol!! Couldn’t help myself .. When there’s a rhyme it must be written.. Just kidding!! 😊
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So… that Jamie…it a great point of departure for collaboration!!!
Please write for me a few more lines…then, I’ll fall in. Yes?
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Sounds like fun! Ok.. I’m in!! 😊
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Wonderful…
If you’d like….
Flesh out those thoughts a little more, and send to me…
Then I’ll pick up!!
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Sure thing.. I have many more thoughts to add for sure ..
😊 !
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Lol I’m not sure if you got this? Think I sent it to the wrong thing .. Oops!! 😊
Addicts of the unseen, fueled by dreams, led by the heart, motivated by hope, sparked from the soul, empowered by the same unseen..
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Love this Jamie!!!!
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Thank you !! Can’t wait too hear you part!!
Sorry! I really thought that I had sent this like a half hour go..
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😊😊 !!
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Want me to pick up from here, or do you want to add more?
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If you would like to write some then I can try to pick up where you left off ? Or if you want I can write more and you can finish it ? Completely up to you.. Either way I’m fine with it.. 😊
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Ok… I’ll pick up where you left off.
Unfortunately… time for me to go to bed since I get up at 415am.
I’ll have a go at it tomorrow when I get home.
Can’t wait!!
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Ok sounds great !! Can’t wait to read your part!! Good night.. 😊!
Maybe over the weekend we can write another one if time for both of us will be more flexible ..
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Wonderful Jamie…
Good night!
I’m inspired!!
😊😊
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Great!! me too!! 😊!
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😊!
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Motivated by hope, sparked from the soul. Empowered by visions unseen..
Well that’s what I have lol
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Perfect!!
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