You’re crashing waves that pull me under, and toss me about. Every time I come to the surface, to gasp for air, you come crashing down. Then I’m pushed into the deep, dark abyss, with the weight of the ocean bearing down upon me. Keeping me in this endless repetition, of almost drowning, reaching shore, then almost drowning again. Time after time. This place where emotion over powers logic. This place where I can never catch my breath. I grasp for the shore with everything within me,but when you come calling. It’s so easy to let go, and let the tide pull me back into the crashing waves all over again.
– Jamie Whorton©
Very good descriptive writing.
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Thank you! 😊
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Sounds like my life!! Lol…😊
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Lol! All of us been there.. It will get better ☺
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great imagery; powerful poem
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Thank you so much ! 😊
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