Weeping willows line the creek bank, their long branches out stretched over the water. Flowing strands hang down almost touching, reflecting back a ripply image. Water Striders skip, while fish create mini echoes then swim away. A deer stands on the bank drinking the cool water. Down stream the babbling water splashes over the smooth creek stone. The sun shines down creating a hazy fog raising from the stream, and surrounding dew covered grass. The smell of the water, and damp earth hangs in the air. Just a simple scene of nature’s beauty.
– Jamie Whorton ©
A simple scene which you capture perfectly in beautiful poetic stride. I could easily place myself in this scene.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind words, and the time you took to read my work. I’m so glad you liked it.
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You are kindly welcome. I enjoy your work immensely. Am trying to like this piece but I have read so many this evening that WP has cut me off for now 🙂
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That’s really kind of you. I really enjoy reading yours as well. And thanks again its much appreciated . 😊 !
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Thank you and it’s my pleasure 🙂
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Just right…”a simple scene of nature’s beauty.”
So well done Jamie!
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
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You help me see…
That’s incredibly important.
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Aww! That’s really nice of you to say..
And all your kind words give me confidence in my writing.
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Ok…so it’s a deal. You keep helping me see…and I’ll do the same for you.
Deal?
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You have got yourself a deal..
Its pretty great to feed off creative energy
( The whole great minds think alike thing)
You’re reading my mind lol!
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Deal Jamie…you help me see…I help you see.
And words, from the both of us, flow.
Are you with me?
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Deal.. I’m am with you.. I think we could make a pretty good creative team. And it will give us both motivation.
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Wonderful Jamie!!
Thank you!!
Let me know if you want to collaborate at some point.
Either you with my verse…or yours with me. As I mentioned, I’m a huge fan of Mary Oliver…and since I know you’ve acquired a similar fanaticism,
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I would love to join your efforts in capturing the natural world!!
Whatever makes you most comfortable.
Just let me know.
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Ok great !! We can help each other out. My e-mail is Jamiewhorton65@gmail.com if you ever have any questions about nature writing, you can email me and I’ll do my best to help you out.
You can help me build my vocabulary. I’ve been learning all kinds of new words reading your work. Plus I like the persuasive writing technique/ style you use.
I am truly honored..
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Perfect Jamie…it’s a deal.
You can reach me at bill@wcspoetry.com.
I’ll look for opportunities for us to collaborate, and perhaps you could do the same.
The feeling is mutual!
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Ok great. You have yourself a deal..
Thank you.
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Yes…. a deal.
This will be a great experiment, and experience in the power of the written word.
What a wonderful journey.
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Yes.. I agree. I look forward to it..
Let me know if you have any ideas that you would like my opinion or help on. I’ll do what I can to help.
Thank you again.
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Perfect! I’ll send you a note this weekend on a few ideas for collaboration.
No pressure…
Only if it’s right for both of us!
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Ok sounds great! I look forward to reading.
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😊!!
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😊 !!
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